tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post8943655894258198970..comments2019-11-01T05:16:08.914-07:00Comments on mind imprisoned: Siddharthahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09045822909302759589noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post-33620497336622531552007-11-01T10:15:00.000-07:002007-11-01T10:15:00.000-07:00nice comment ... beautiful ....1st) I appreciate c...nice comment ... beautiful ....<BR/><BR/>1st) I appreciate comments, whoever may be the commentator what matters is what he comments and if anyone wants to prove those comments wrong he/she shouldn't get judgmental about the commentator.<BR/><BR/>2nd) the beauty of poems is that they rhyme (technically according to definitions)<BR/><BR/>3rd)as a second hand poet myself i tend to believe and also i have hard core faith in the belief that somethings can only be said in poems than proses ... it is easier to sell your emotions in camouflaged articles called poems ... <BR/>4th)poems hides the hypocrite in every person <BR/><BR/>5th)the real technique of a second hander is to make you believe that you are him/her ... so that if u fall in love with the second hander u will be a narcissist and if u hate them then u will kill yourself ... <BR/><BR/>6th)ask me for some of my poems ... actually i have written "the literal sense 2nd hand poetry" ie. had translated some works of haribans rai bachhan ... and also some original ones too ... the point is not that i am defending myself as a amateur poet but i am agreeing to u that i am a second hander ... just that i would be glad if u can find my 2nd hand points in my poems ... <BR/><BR/>:)<BR/><BR/>NICE OBSERVATIONS DUDE ...Kaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17235981097039613874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post-51833947408325010282007-10-30T01:47:00.000-07:002007-10-30T01:47:00.000-07:00saala tum logon ka baat khali 'esoteric-esoteric' ...saala tum logon ka baat khali 'esoteric-esoteric' lag raha hai..kahan uski aankhein aur ye dry intellectualism..kahan chaand ka beauty aur ye kaunsa sahi-galat..achha poetry-bura poetry..second hand-first hand...<BR/><BR/>Accha hai ki tum socha ye sab daaru..lekin baat simple hai yaar..jaroori nahi ki mujhe koi cheez ka notion hai pehle se and after seeing something i m using it as a metaphor..may be prejudiced ..but sometimes seeing something reminds u of somethingelse (say metaphor)spontaneously...i have no virtue or vengeance to seek for the originality of my use of some word...thing is logon ka copy karna bhi bura nahi hai..in the creative world..chaand pe kisi ka copy right nahi hai ki main use karne lagunga to mujhe second hand poet bologe tum... :P<BR/><BR/>anyways...dimaag ka dahi karte raho..achha lagta hai ..misti dahi bhalo..khub bhalo.. :DHOCUS POCUShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13079372751069238035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post-37235734997206311942007-10-29T11:38:00.000-07:002007-10-29T11:38:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post-91954280052547073802007-10-29T00:44:00.000-07:002007-10-29T00:44:00.000-07:00well why keep draggig the moon out always in the p...well why keep draggig the moon out always in the poem when it has already been the protagonist for many love poems. i agree that it is not possible to see the moon in the same way as the first man saw it but it would be the creativity of the first man to see the moon in a different way..i mean it is possible that in his times something else was playing the role in the poems that the moon plays today and he could imagine a new and beautiful metaphor quite different. i just wish to say that the poets of today, if they could stop clinging to existing thoughts and concepts and come up with original ones with things around them, poem reading cld be much more a delight..take for tht matter neruda and his metaphors, completely original and striking.. i know tht neruda can be only one but still and effort in such direction will be appreciated in rather than reading those ghisa pita types...<BR/><BR/> as for the postman its also one of my fav movies and his act of writing the poem touched me ..but i would just ask whether u wld think the same thing if made to read the poem without knowing ane story behind it, just on the basis of wht u read, without ane prejudice ...i mean it is not the poem but the man and the story behind him tht play a part in creating the feeling....and who knows the poem might still be realy original and beautiful...but for tht we wld need to it :)Siddharthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09045822909302759589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33165865.post-78841079927080374352007-10-28T14:23:00.000-07:002007-10-28T14:23:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com